no offense, my first response to your add is the pictures suck. if you want something to sell fast, make the person viewing your add WANT to buy your stuff. best way to do that is to get some good, high quality pictures.
and go back to stock as much as possible; no way I'd want to buy your car with 92K miles on it knowing that it's been modified to the extent it currently is.
Agreed on going back to stock as much as possible. Most sensible guys wont purchase a car that is modded heavily. That being said you could always say car is modded and not list every single thing you have done, maybe just like window tint, head unit, and leave out tuners like the accessport.
Holy s*** that's a lot of text. Keep it simple and ditch the modifications. They hurt resale not help it. Again, keep it simple. Photos aren't bad. Hell, it's an MS3 in decent shape if they want a better look, set an appointment. No one buys pictures and they aren't going to come see it just because of them. 92k on the ODO isn't going to help but it's clean.
Keep it real simple. You want people to be curious and to call. Don't give them the whole story.